um- ok- this a drawn form life song?

it's well written but- sounds like the person had better have been happy the other wasn't armed

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"If we don't fight for our freedom....who will?"

Does writing stuff like this make you feel better?
It is very well written.

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"Can miles truly separate you from friends... If you want to be with someone you love, aren't you already there?"
Richard Bach
Eph 4:4,5
One Lord, one faith, one baptism; one God and Father of all, who is over all and through all and in all."

Sort of... It wasn't really meant for anything, but then it turned into something, as they always do.

Anyways, thanks for your sweet comments!

~M

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~Merryde Anne Tavora~

only the future seems clear to me right now
A foreign objective to be at peace with… -Poets Dream, Ra-

Originally, it was nothing, but I couldn't get the repeating stanza out of my head. So why not turn it into something applicable to life? It's just a statement dearie; that's all. It was written, because the blank paper was there. It means nothing. Unless of course, it means something to you?

Thanks for the comment.
~M

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~Merryde Anne Tavora~

only the future seems clear to me right now
A foreign objective to be at peace with… -Poets Dream, Ra-

as always- u r very welcome.

have you sold any of your lyrics yet? (cause that's what the sound like to me- song lyrics and not just poetry. poetry is ok, but lyrics- )


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"If we don't fight for our freedom....who will?"

Nope... I should try... I don't know what's stopping me.

Thanks again!

~M

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~Merryde Anne Tavora~

only the future seems clear to me right now
A foreign objective to be at peace with… -Poets Dream, Ra-

This seems to bear meaning, but upon reading the comments, I see it wasn't meant to illustrate something that happened, or currently is happening.

You did a good job though, depicting the scenario, where one person's begging to have the other back again, but [she] knows better than to listen to [him] after the inferred events that preceded.

Was the repeated stanza an excerpt from something else you've written, or just a chorus? A small part of me (probably the blonde side) thinks it's a borrowed stanza from another of your works, but for the most part, I think the italics just designate it as the chorus. Please, help my blonde side find its way. It's very lost in a semi-vast universe... My mind. *dramatic music comparable to the Star Wars theme*

the first step is always the hardest...

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"If we don't fight for our freedom....who will?"

hahaha... Thanks so much luv!

It's definitely just a chorus. It was written during work; so hence the country song-vibe going on. lol

Thanks for makin me smile, with the blonde comments. lol. I needed that.


~M

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~Merryde Anne Tavora~

only the future seems clear to me right now
A foreign objective to be at peace with… -Poets Dream, Ra-