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Thinking just one thing,
How I want to be with him.
Two hearts beating out
A staccato rhythm.

Three words to say,
But I still don't know what I'm feelin.
Four kisses (or twelve) later,
And my mind is still reelin.

A trail of candy-flavored kisses
Melting on my skin.
I memorize your taste,
And now I've let you win.

Thinking just one thing,
How I want to be with him.
Two hearts beating out
A staccato rhythm.

Three words to say,
But I still don't know what I'm feelin.
Four kisses (or twelve) later,
And my mind is still reelin.

I don't know what to say,
I don't know what to do...
But darlin, one thing I know;
Is how much I miss you...
©2009 ~nuisance15
:iconnuisance15:

Author's Comments

I haz a happy. :)


Don't know if I like this poem though. I know it's not my best work... But honestly, I don't know how else to say it.

Comments, complaints, nags, critiques, etc. would all be appreciated!

:hug:
~M

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:iconmeeden:
so sweet & romantic - a light heart loving beating out here in happiness - wonderfully expressed :butterfly:
:iconnuisance15:
Thank you! :)
:hug:
~M

--
~Merryde Anne Tavora~

I can do all things through Him who strengthens me Philippians 4:13

R.I.P. Steven Taylor Riles 1989-2008
R.I.P. Steven Riles Beloved father...

~Merryde Anne Tavora~
:icondante203:
You mustve been goin through some sort of emotions with this I can feel it and very few poems do that to me so good job!

--
Never Compromise! Not even in the face of Armageddon, thats always been the difference between you and I
:iconafisamuleal:
I like it :hug:

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My Playlist is Mr. Awesome! (the playlist)
[link]
:iconnuisance15:
Thanks!
:hug:
~M

--
~Merryde Anne Tavora~

I can do all things through Him who strengthens me Philippians 4:13

R.I.P. Steven Taylor Riles 1989-2008
R.I.P. Steven Riles Beloved father...

~Merryde Anne Tavora~
:iconnuisance15:
Thank you! :)
:hug:
~M

--
~Merryde Anne Tavora~

I can do all things through Him who strengthens me Philippians 4:13

R.I.P. Steven Taylor Riles 1989-2008
R.I.P. Steven Riles Beloved father...

~Merryde Anne Tavora~
:icondante203:
mhmmm

--
Never Compromise! Not even in the face of Armageddon, thats always been the difference between you and I
:iconlpfanxtreme:
I needn't say anything more than "you did an amazing job".

:hug:
:iconnuisance15:
Aww... Thanks hon!
:hug:
~M

--
~Merryde Anne Tavora~

I can do all things through Him who strengthens me Philippians 4:13

R.I.P. Steven Taylor Riles 1989-2008
R.I.P. Steven Riles Beloved father...

~Merryde Anne Tavora~

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