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You thought you could be,
The apple of my eye.
You thought you would be,
The bright sun in my sky.

You just wanted to feel,
Yeah, I just called your bluff.
You wanted something real,
I guess I wasn't real enough.

My angel,
Did you know me at all?
When you said,
I was your world...
Did you know me at all?
When you said,
I was beautiful...
Don't you know me at all?


You thought I would be,
The innocent one.
You thought I could be,
So easily won.

You thought I believed,
The sweet lies of your kiss.
You think that I grieved,
When love went amiss.

My angel,
Did you know me at all?
When you said,
I was your world...
Did you know me at all?
When you said,
I was beautiful...
Don't you know me at all?


Did you think I believed you,
When you said you wouldn't take,
More than I would give?
Did you think I believed you,
When you said you wouldn't take,
More than I would give?


My angel,
Did you know me at all?
When you said,
I was your world...
Did you know me at all?
When you said,
I was beautiful...
Don't you know me at all?

Don't you know me at all?

~Merryde Anne Tavora~
©2009 ~nuisance15
:iconnuisance15:

Author's Comments

It's the truth of it. I don't think he knew me... I don't think he bothered to try to get to know me. Whatever.

Comments?


Much love,
~M

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:iconmeowsap:
Ahh...this one is very "sharp" if thats the word...I can feel the sting of each word.
Not sure what happened, but if what I can guess from the poem is true, I'm sorry...its probably and hopefully for the better.

:glomp: :heart:

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I always thought love was shaped like a heart,
But its actually shaped like a cross!
:iconnuisance15:
Eh, the boyfriend was a loser. Whatever. I'm over it. :)


Thanks though!!!
:hug:
~M

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~Merryde Anne Tavora~

only the future seems clear to me right now
A foreign objective to be at peace with…
-Poets Dream, Ra-
:iconsashagabrielmommy:
I could feel the stabs with each word. I'm sorry this happend. Remember there is One that loves you forever. Lean on Him to get through this and know what the object in the writing did to you will, in turn be done to them tenfold.

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"If we don't fight for our freedom....who will?"
:iconnuisance15:
Thanks! I'm fine though. I promise. :)
:hug:
~M

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~Merryde Anne Tavora~

only the future seems clear to me right now
A foreign objective to be at peace with…
-Poets Dream, Ra-
:iconsashagabrielmommy:
ok- just looking out of a friend. :hug:

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"If we don't fight for our freedom....who will?"
:iconlpfanxtreme:
I'd say this is definitely one of the best ones you've done... It's one of my favorites, anyway. A bit more sting than the usual poem you put out, as another user said.

I can definitely feel your pain as I read this; kind of reminds me of an MCR song, like "Mama", but it's got your style, so I don't exactly think of their music, but I can still definitely relate it to some of their... "Softer" songs, I suppose.

Great job! Definitely another :+fav: in my collection. ;D
:iconmeowsap:
That's good. :D

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I always thought love was shaped like a heart,
But its actually shaped like a cross!
:iconnuisance15:
Thank you! I like this one too... I've been listening to alot of softer pop lately, actually. It's kinda inspired by the styles of Sara Bareilles, Erin McCarley, and Kate Voegele...

As always, much appreciation for your sweet comments! :)

:hug:
~M

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~Merryde Anne Tavora~

only the future seems clear to me right now
A foreign objective to be at peace with…
-Poets Dream, Ra-
:iconafisamuleal:
I like it, it's sad, though :(

It has a sharpness to it, yes, but more like a pointed neutrality, ahahaha. There's a specific something that most everyone sharply knows that this is.

It works nicely through the clairvoyance with the penchant flattery. Ie, I like the repetition of "my angel".

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My Playlist is Mr. Awesome! (the playlist)
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